AuthorTopic: EVIL CARNIVAL (WIP) HELP! :)  (Read 10783 times)

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Re: EVIL CARNIVAL (WIP) HELP! :)

Reply #10 on: November 28, 2006, 08:18:01 pm
Heya,

The face closest to us doesn´t look like it belongs in the picture, it has got too much of the reference in it I think, somehow I think it looks "too real".

It´s a fantastic piece of art I´d say :]

Cheers,

Lelle

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Re: EVIL CARNIVAL (WIP) HELP! :)

Reply #11 on: November 28, 2006, 08:46:18 pm
Thanks alot  :)

but thats a problem I really dont know how im gonna go about fixing.

I mean I drew the guy first, and after it I thought..hey this would make a funny picture if I added a background, so I went from there...I do see what you mean but..any ideas on how to kind of merge them together?

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Re: EVIL CARNIVAL (WIP) HELP! :)

Reply #12 on: November 28, 2006, 08:51:03 pm
I think the main deal here is the palettes. The colours used on the dude don't work with the rest of the picture, and suggest a completely different lighting. I'd lower the saturation and up the contrast on his face and perhaps merge the palettes to unify the picture more.

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Re: EVIL CARNIVAL (WIP) HELP! :)

Reply #13 on: November 28, 2006, 09:31:42 pm
It is pretty nice but one of the guy's cheaks is bloated looking.

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Re: EVIL CARNIVAL (WIP) HELP! :)

Reply #14 on: November 28, 2006, 09:35:39 pm
It is pretty nice but one of the guy's cheaks is bloated looking.

reference is bloated (hes a fat ass  :P)

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Re: EVIL CARNIVAL (WIP) HELP! :)

Reply #15 on: November 28, 2006, 10:02:56 pm
WIP!!!!!!!!!!! enjoy....

working on toning down the brightness on the foreground guy.



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Re: EVIL CARNIVAL (WIP) HELP! :)

Reply #16 on: November 29, 2006, 09:41:17 am
looks great!!!
good job
and that weird look on the face is more scary than the clown... lmao
good job
the mountains in the background - especially the mountain on the far left lacks enough shading and highlighting
guess u forgot it :p

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Re: EVIL CARNIVAL (WIP) HELP! :)

Reply #17 on: November 29, 2006, 10:24:32 am
I think the thing that makes the "real" face stand out is.. well, two things. First of all, the lighting, which doesn't seem to match with the rest of the picture. Second, the fact that it's just a head sticking out from nowhere. If whoever it is is supposed to be standing there, then those tents must be really big and elongated, seeing as the clown looks to be two or three heads taller than the "real" person. It also bugs me a little that the wooden texture has such extreme contrast, but no real detail. It looks almost as if the shapes were carved out by hand, really deep. Doesn't look too natural. Some AA on the wood would also be nice, since the faces are all soft and smoothed out and dithery, and the wood is harsh and looks unfinished in comparison.

It'd also be nice to have some sort of trick to add to the perception of depth to the buildings further away, like making them progressively darker or less saturated.

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Re: EVIL CARNIVAL (WIP) HELP! :)

Reply #18 on: November 29, 2006, 06:14:04 pm
Here is an animated version of the guys face.


Okay I have 3 lighting effects. The first one is the first image you've all seen.. Bright faced guy.. 2nd farme is a tad darker, and the 3rd face is the darkest.

If these still look ugly would anyone mind helping me find a nice pallete for the guys face to match the background?

I am very thankful for all this help guys. Great crits.. I'm working on fixing the wood right now so it wont look as jagged.

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Re: EVIL CARNIVAL (WIP) HELP! :)

Reply #19 on: November 29, 2006, 07:24:59 pm
Hey guys... Thanks for the crits...

Fixed: Wood grain.
         Added more colors to wood.
         Darkened the tents in the background
         Darkened the guy screaming in the foregrounds face
         Added a slight adjustment to the far left mountain range..just to darken it up a bit.


Thanks a ton guys..its really coming along nicely. Couldnt have done it without yall...any more crits?