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Offline 8loop8

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Character color - feedback needed!

on: March 20, 2018, 10:21:32 pm
This is a character i drew for a personal project.

The problem I'm having is readability, the colors just dont pop out enough, also there is visual noise where the color of the arm in the shadow meets the body, or where the right arm connects to the right leg.

I think I've identifyed the problems, but i have no idea how to go about adressing that.

Otherwise, I think that the character has a readable face and a good shilouette. (thoughts?)

« Last Edit: March 21, 2018, 07:24:54 am by 8loop8 »

Offline Curly

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Re: Character color - feedback needed!

Reply #1 on: March 20, 2018, 10:28:34 pm
Wow at this size even if it's supposed to be readable it won't be haha
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Offline 8loop8

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Re: Character color - feedback needed!

Reply #2 on: March 21, 2018, 07:21:18 am
Wow at this size even if it's supposed to be readable it won't be haha
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That is the original size :/ I't only gets bigger.
I'll edit it

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Re: Character color - feedback needed!

Reply #3 on: March 21, 2018, 07:23:55 am
I tried moving the right leg a pixel inward, but moving the right arm a bit out worked much better, but i think it kind of loses that primate look a bit, maybe the shoulder needs be a bit more in now that the lower arm portion is moved outwards.

Also, i ramped the saturation up a bit, but i think you need to alter the palette to some extent.

« Last Edit: March 21, 2018, 07:25:56 am by krmko »