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Offline MichaelH

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self-portrait

on: March 15, 2018, 05:27:22 pm
tips?  ???



maybe I'll make a version with gif, opening the mouth and screaming
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Re: self-portrait

Reply #1 on: March 15, 2018, 06:14:40 pm
neck blood looks kinda hokey and artefacty
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Re: self-portrait

Reply #2 on: March 15, 2018, 06:23:09 pm
The blood trails feel disconnected from the face because the shading on them doesn't follow the shading on the rest of the face. It also looks like the one on the left casts a large shadow onto the cheek right beneath the eye...?
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Re: self-portrait

Reply #3 on: March 15, 2018, 06:48:04 pm
Quote from: MysteryMeat on March 15, 2018, 06:14:40 pm
neck blood looks kinda hokey and artefacty
The worst part is that I saw, but I didn't edit right away and I forgot to correct it  :lol:

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Re: self-portrait

Reply #4 on: March 15, 2018, 07:53:28 pm
busted image bud
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