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Offline Delgneith

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Re: mushroom with pot on its head

Reply #10 on: November 18, 2006, 10:58:08 pm
Well I'll be honest, I think it needs a lot of work. Your lines are rough, your colors don't really seem to go together that well and it doesn't look very mushroom-like.

Because I'd rather not describe every little thing I see wrong I made an edit so you can get a fresh look on how you could go about it.
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Re: mushroom with pot on its head

Reply #11 on: November 19, 2006, 01:07:28 am
It still doesn't look like a mushroom.
Delgneith's edit is perfect.
He shows you how to shade this properly.

You've made one big shade and that is it.
Where as he's added higlight on the mouth, much better details around the eyes.
His shows depth and yours looks flat.
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Re: mushroom with pot on its head

Reply #12 on: November 19, 2006, 03:40:25 am
goddamnit, that good, im trying but i cant get the effect you created......
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Re: mushroom with pot on its head

Reply #13 on: November 19, 2006, 04:26:45 am
hehe thanks man this is what i gotz

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Re: mushroom with pot on its head

Reply #14 on: November 19, 2006, 05:10:04 am
Excellent improvement!  ;D  I'd make the lightest shade a little bit more round in shape though. See how it's pointy towards the left eye? I'd try to smooth that out a bit.
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Re: mushroom with pot on its head

Reply #15 on: November 19, 2006, 05:18:56 am
yeah but then it looks really uneven
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Re: mushroom with pot on its head

Reply #16 on: November 19, 2006, 05:28:50 am
nods, well.. it could still be more rounded. It looks odd pointy.
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Re: mushroom with pot on its head

Reply #17 on: November 19, 2006, 05:32:06 am
.... oooookayyyyyy.... YAY!!!
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Re: mushroom with pot on its head

Reply #18 on: November 19, 2006, 05:44:30 am
That's coming along really nicely. Love the choice of colors.
I'm sure you're a shoe-in to win now. *winks*
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Re: mushroom with pot on its head

Reply #19 on: November 19, 2006, 05:46:03 am
well i was always gonna win, you obviously never seen any of tomster785's pixels, now i have a new ambition, get in teh featured works of pixel joint, and get ait accepted in the public beta queue
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