Skellington

[Ryudo]

I'm new here and I want to become a better spriter. I made a Skellington sprite and I want some critisizm. Edits are welcome.

[Ryona]

That looks neat. The style is perfect too. Looks totally like him. Awesome.
Nice job with the shading too.

[alkaline]

it's a good start, but i suggest you clean it up a bit more. looks unfinished to me.



here'sa some quick little edit i did. try not to leave such a big gap between colors like the darkest color and second darkest. also, it would probably benefit from a less varying outline judging by the piece. AAing can smooth your stuff out too.

[Skull]

Now that's Swish. Take note.
Less drastic colour change and a lot smoothness going on.

[Ryudo]

it's a good start, but i suggest you clean it up a bit more. looks unfinished to me.



here'sa some quick little edit i did. try not to leave such a big gap between colors like the darkest color and second darkest. also, it would probably benefit from a less varying outline judging by the piece. AAing can smooth your stuff out too.

Now, if it isn't Mr. Ampersand.

I can see what you did with that and now I see where I went wrong. Very much thanks.

[2dgamers]

Well done on the shading! The AA has been incorporated very well too. (Wish I could do that!) I like the color choice. (Another thing I am not good at.) Let's see the rest of him now.