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Re: Josephin

Reply #20 on: November 25, 2006, 06:59:29 am
Wow, thats great work!

@ ptoing : Awesome tutorial, well mini tutorial. I think I understand AA a little better now! I am/was one of the random pixel guys  :P

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Re: Josephin

Reply #21 on: November 25, 2006, 02:07:02 pm
This is a really great piece, I truly admire it. But the line between the hair and the neck/shoulder really bothered me, it looks jagged:

See what I mean?

I made a little edit to get rid of the jagged edge:


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« Last Edit: November 25, 2006, 02:32:55 pm by Shadow Wolf »

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Re: Josephin

Reply #22 on: November 25, 2006, 02:12:17 pm
Thanks, that really showed me how i could AA a bit better to.. I have not really worked much on this, but i will soon so an update is comming soon :)

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Re: Josephin

Reply #23 on: November 26, 2006, 07:50:49 am
Here is the reference.



I thought that reminded me of a painting the way it was done.
For this, a long time have I waited.

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Re: Josephin

Reply #24 on: November 27, 2006, 03:44:53 pm
Allright fixed some errors and tried changing the pallette a bit, is it good or bad?

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Re: Josephin

Reply #25 on: November 27, 2006, 05:51:12 pm
I like the old palette more, this is really good. Try taking it in a more Greenish direction than purple.
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Re: Josephin

Reply #26 on: November 27, 2006, 10:18:46 pm
Just one thing i thought i'd point out, you've made her jaw quite square and her forehead kind of pulled back, so she loses some femininity i think. Although if you're not following the picture greatly then it's fine i guess - although the neck to jaw transition looks too much like a crease than a shadow atm.

Looks like someone in my film studies class.

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Re: Josephin

Reply #27 on: November 27, 2006, 11:14:25 pm
hey dude, check this part of the neck.. its looking wierd, i suggest u to change it  :y:



Good luck bro :)
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Re: Josephin

Reply #28 on: November 30, 2006, 12:37:58 pm


Fixed the neck, fixed her right eye a bit.. I could't do green hueshift, it just looked wierd and she ended up looking like a zombie.. sorry. Anyway, i tried some greyscale.. looked pretty okay, i doubt i will use a greyscale as finnished product since i worked alot with the hues :P..

Anyway, any more crits?.. Keep me comming :D, its really helping me. And yea, thanks everyone :)

Edit :

I decided to keep the Purplely Pallette.. anyway heres the latest update, totally fixed all the dithering.
New/Old


I think this is getting finnished, time for a sexy backround :)!! Anyone got any suggestions?
« Last Edit: November 30, 2006, 07:01:42 pm by ZoSo »