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[Feedback] Pixel art House

on: January 23, 2018, 06:41:48 pm
Hey!, I am still pretty new to pixel art so I would love to get some feedback

The building is supposed to be in the night but I havent made a background yet.


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Re: [Feedback] Pixel art House

Reply #1 on: January 23, 2018, 07:02:46 pm
Do the background before you put too much work into the buildings. A background has a lot of impact on how the rest of the colours and details look. At the very least, put in some solid colours that represent the major parts of the background.

It looks like you're using a bunch of blow effects, but they don't really read. Try using some solid colours to show the illumination of the bricks, window frames, etc from the windows, then soften them up later if you want to. Don't start with complex things like gradients, they're just going to make it more difficult to see your more fundamental problems and to make edits.

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Re: [Feedback] Pixel art House

Reply #2 on: January 23, 2018, 10:21:29 pm
Yeah, I am not really sure what I want as background yet. Still deciding if this house takes place in a city or a farmer village.
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Re: [Feedback] Pixel art House

Reply #3 on: January 24, 2018, 04:04:49 pm
I'm really like it, I would suggest to put a night background could be nice.