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Offline Jedemy

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[Feedback] Monster for my game

on: January 10, 2018, 09:09:53 am
Hi folks!

Before i start to animate this, i would like to get your opinion! What do you guys think and how can i improve this?
(Only 2 shades each colour)

Thanks for your time!


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Re: [Feedback] Monster for my game

Reply #1 on: January 10, 2018, 04:03:58 pm
The colors look a bit dull, you could add some contrast to your palette.

(I darkened the darker blue and the darker "white". I also changed the right end of its face, I think it looks better that way, but it's up to you  :))
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Re: [Feedback] Monster for my game

Reply #2 on: January 10, 2018, 05:26:04 pm
Thanks Zanorin, it is way better indeed! :D

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Re: [Feedback] Monster for my game

Reply #3 on: January 11, 2018, 04:31:01 am
Idle animation and walk animation



Any feedback is welcome!

Restriction: 2 Shades each colour, 4 Frames
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Re: [Feedback] Monster for my game

Reply #4 on: January 11, 2018, 01:48:35 pm
The spikes on his back look better  :y:

Idle: The tail motion is nice, you should also animate his body & his shoulders kind of the same "wavy" way, I think it's weird if his tail moves a lot and his body remains still..

Walking: It does look like he's walking, but it looks like it's missing half of the frames, it feels like a loop of the first part of his walking animation to me. But if you really want to keep it at no more than 4 frames, I don't really know how you could improve it ^^

Other than that they look nice ! Will they be in the same game as your witch ?
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Re: [Feedback] Monster for my game

Reply #5 on: January 11, 2018, 02:51:28 pm
Thanks for your feedback Zanorin, i should definitely need to work on idle animation!

I try to keep things simple as possible but also presentable. I am planning to have a lot of sprites in the game and if i try to make stuff too detailed , i will need a lot of time to finish them.

Yes it is in the same game as my Witch! :)