WareWolf help!

[Zach]

i need some good CnC on this! please i wanna see if I can finish this

[Seal]

Very cool, I love the colours in em.

[Kcilc]

Well I'm not that good at cnc, but here are the crits I have.

The first thing is that his mouth should be just one pixel more open(If he's howling).

The other thing is that the upper chest looks like this. |          | in stead of this. |  |      |
But this might be a style choice?                                |_____|                         |_|___|

Edit:
One more thing, It would look alot better if you added some fur.

[Helm]

dissagree with the above crits, sorry.

The chest is fine I think. The mouth could be one pixel more open, but it's a stylistic choice, and definately don't add fur detail texture at that resolution, it'll be a mess.

I love the piece, love the colours and the sideways lightsource. It's a very nice piece, congrats.

[ejay]

Looks great! I think the head might stand out better with some more shading to help separate the jaw from the neck ,and it seems to me that the right angle in the white outline around his left foot ankle is slightly distracting. Cool stuff , i like his stance and the lighting, it all works very well together.

[Zach]

thanks for the posts people, yah i was going to try and texture it at first, but it didn't work out at all :\

but oh well, yah the other peck(boob) is shaded so you can't really see it, i think it fits the angel, that's one of the things that kinda troubled me, that and the far leg, it's kinda slopy and i was wondering if anyone could crit on that since IMO it looks really unfinished...

[Kcilc]

I think that the back leg looks too far away(only the bottom half),
so if you make it a little bit wider and longer it would look more in perspective.
But I can't see anything else wrong.