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Offline Silver91748

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Hospital Stretcher Critique?

on: October 08, 2017, 06:06:08 pm
Can I get some critique on this hospital stretcher?

Offline Robbie Harrison

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Re: Hospital Stretcher Critique?

Reply #1 on: October 13, 2017, 01:09:35 am
I tried this edit :



I incresed the reflexion, the contrast between the shade of greens and reduced the "flaws" in the matress. But I think that it depends really on the background for this sprite, as a lot of detail could make it "lost in the crowd" if the background has a lot of objects.
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Re: Hospital Stretcher Critique?

Reply #2 on: October 13, 2017, 02:56:10 am
I'm not a fan of the random dark pixels you have scattered across padding.  I take it you were trying to show wrinkles on a sheet, but the contrast is so high and the lines are so scattered and without the feeling of intentional placement that they feel like dirt or something spotty on the cloth rather than the form you were going for.

The bottom legs bother me a bit as well.  You've doubled up the black line on the legs which stands out in a really strong way contrasted with the rest of the sprite.  The diagonal bars are already thicker than the bars above, causing those lower portions to feel quite thicker than the top half.
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Re: Hospital Stretcher Critique?

Reply #3 on: October 13, 2017, 02:44:49 pm
I think you could do better if you didn't outline on the inside of the sprite.