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Re: [WIP][Nudity] Female character.

Reply #10 on: October 03, 2017, 02:30:49 pm
Good blinking!

That amount of torso motion shouldn't create so much breast movement. The movement itself is well-animated, just out of place.

The bellybutton's movement feels a bit strange to me. Maybe subpixel it, have a dark-shadow trail of sorts? It moves too much.

The arms look stiff, try giving them a little side to side motion, with more movement beneath each joint (a little in the upper arm, more in the lower arm, even more in the hand). The looser the arms, the more they'll swing in this kind of motion. If they're meant to be stiff and battle-ready, then perhaps add a little bit of motion from the elbows down, have her bring her fists forward a little. A little swinging there will also make her fists feel heavier.


Forgot to add this to my previous post: If you're after realistic proportions rather than "heroic" ones, you should make her head larger as it's very small, and perhaps also shorten her legs a bit. On a real person, the crotch is approximately halfway between the top of the head and the soles of the feet. If you're after more stylised proportions, this is fine.

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Re: [WIP][Nudity] Female character.

Reply #11 on: October 03, 2017, 03:07:10 pm
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Re: [WIP][Nudity] Female character.

Reply #12 on: October 03, 2017, 03:13:16 pm
Your center point is below the crotch, so her legs are long. And she's 8 heads tall, that's quite tall. Again, this is all fine if you're going for that kind of stylization.

The knees look too low. In my edit I have them a pixel higher, I think that looks better.
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Re: [WIP][Nudity] Female character.

Reply #13 on: October 03, 2017, 04:46:24 pm
Fixed knees, crotch and hands.
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Re: [WIP][Nudity] Female character.

Reply #14 on: October 04, 2017, 05:08:15 pm
Tried another pose
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Re: [WIP][Nudity] Female character.

Reply #15 on: October 08, 2017, 06:18:58 pm

Another try to do idle animation
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Re: [CC][WIP][Nudity] Female character.

Reply #16 on: October 11, 2017, 02:39:24 pm
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Re: [CC][WIP][Nudity] Female character.

Reply #17 on: October 11, 2017, 03:36:43 pm
Arms and legs seem a little chunky.  A hair idea?
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Re: [CC][WIP][Nudity] Female character.

Reply #18 on: October 11, 2017, 05:57:22 pm
I made it chunky on purpose
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