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Re: My first tree

Reply #10 on: October 01, 2017, 09:57:49 am
Used a bit more red on the leaves,is it more natural?
Thats a good approach, but i think the tree trunk is a bit too massive (or treetop too small)
I'll work on that

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Re: My first tree

Reply #11 on: October 01, 2017, 09:58:01 am
Used a bit more red on the leaves,is it more natural?

Thats a good approach, but i think the tree trunk is a bit too massive (or treetop too small)


sorry for triple post,thought it didn't send them,then found out they were on a 2nd page :blind:(already reported myself to moderator)

Tried fixing shadows,but I don't know if its even noticeable

(light source should be 3/4 on the left and a bit from above)
Here I dared to change the shadows more than usual,is it better?

« Last Edit: October 01, 2017, 02:29:03 pm by Afelium »

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Re: My first tree

Reply #12 on: October 01, 2017, 04:58:33 pm
Used a bit more red on the leaves,is it more natural?

Thats a good approach, but i think the tree trunk is a bit too massive (or treetop too small)


sorry for triple post,thought it didn't send them,then found out they were on a 2nd page :blind:(already reported myself to moderator)

Tried fixing shadows,but I don't know if its even noticeable

(light source should be 3/4 on the left and a bit from above)
Here I dared to change the shadows more than usual,is it better?

Now that's a tree! and nice fix on the colors!
Looks all good to me, just take heed, in-case it wasn't what you were aiming for, that this tree is more of a swamp tree and won't really fit in other environments =]

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Re: My first tree

Reply #13 on: October 03, 2017, 12:59:35 pm
Now that's a tree! and nice fix on the colors!
Looks all good to me, just take heed, in-case it wasn't what you were aiming for, that this tree is more of a swamp tree and won't really fit in other environments =]
I'd like to know which of the three edits is better in your opinion