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Offline typeoh

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WIP Iso factory: machinery

on: November 06, 2006, 12:53:17 am
I'm new here, and i just wanted to post this stuff i started today:


13 colors



I plan to add more machines/ random pipes soon
Until then, C+C please


And if you're wondering what the heck that orange stuff is, its an extremely diabotical concoction...     orange soda ;)
« Last Edit: November 06, 2006, 12:55:42 am by typeoh »

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Re: WIP Iso factory: machinery

Reply #1 on: November 06, 2006, 01:55:34 am
hope ya don't mind I made a quick edit on the first one, changed the palette a bit and tried to make the most of the colours. Just because It's metal doesn't mean you can't add any colour. My edit is a bit too brown but you get the point  :P..



also up'ed the contrast too.. Maybe too much...



With Iso I think it looks much better making shines 45degree angles instead of the usual 30degree's.. Looks more noticable imo.

I do like these, keep it up.
« Last Edit: November 06, 2006, 02:02:56 am by Terley »
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Re: WIP Iso factory: machinery

Reply #2 on: November 06, 2006, 03:31:52 pm
Thanks, it does need some more color

I also like what you did with fixing the glass plate on the side, I just couldn't get those reflections to work out

All right, heres my new one, with a darker, more saturated palette:
I also tried some of the AA you did, terley, though I've not used it in a long time

New:                Old:
 


It does have a bit of an army camo look to it...

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Re: WIP Iso factory: machinery

Reply #3 on: November 06, 2006, 05:01:26 pm
it looks better now, but you should've made the yellow outline in the building from dark to light IMO, like terley did in his edit, same goes for the shadows, nice concept overall :y:
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