Need some help with this

[Helm]

Awesome. Good switch. You'll have it down in no-time, man.

[Terley]

Updated colour and eyes. (Did not use Helm's colours I selected them myself!!)

wow will you look at that..  her eyes were too high..



that really makes an amazing difference..

non animated


=edit
Hair change? still working on it, hard getting it to look right on the shoulders.


Anyway im goin to bed, even though it's just a weekend, I gotta get up early in the morning..

[Fool]

Awesome piece =)

The only two things I woud fix - make lower lip bottom line less defined to the ends, now it feels that her lower lip a bit far foward then could be;
And lift eye brows a little up, it would give more girlish look.=)

[flaber]

making an edit for you
playing with facial forms

just thought id say i was making you an edit - because im always too late and comment after a piece is completed

[Faceless]

Her ears are also too high.
I have rather normally sized/positioned ears, and mine end just under my nose.

[Feron]

Well, i wouldn't accept her as my GF...

But seriously, it's quite ready. Release teh background!!1

Thats ok i don't think she'd accept you as a boyfriend.

I don't think it needs a background - its great.  Aweseom palette.

[Godslayer]

Edited the creases, added highlight on left side and darkened area around crease on right. Added a little white to her teeth which were a little lackluster. Toyed with ambient lighting to make a little more noticable. Edited cheek to nose transition on dark side.

Things the edit didn't adress because I'm lazy

-Her neck is stil too small across. When I tried to make the proportion more realistic, she assumed the muscleman neck, and I realized her neck was a bit too long. Try to shorten and widen it.

-The seperation of a real smile from a fake one is the eyes. Right now, the smile doesn't seem to affect her eyes, and what she has now opticaly would look more fitting to a straightlipped expression. Look at your smiling reference. She alsmot assumes the anime style ^_^ thing. Don't really do that, but a real smile will narrow your eyes a bit.

Her hair isn't very thick right now, it seems to be hanging from her scalp very sparesly. I like the outline of hairs and on the shoudlers, but combine that with the original thickness you had, it will make her look more healthy.

Keep it up, Ter.

[Terley]

well im getting there, Im gonna work majorly hard to get the expression right, I see what you mean with that GS, thanks for the comments.



with each edit this really is looking so much better, im ashamed of my first atempts now that I look back, but so far I've learned quite a bit, so big thanks to everyone who's helping 

[lloorren]

I'll point out anything I can.

Unless you're aiming for a realistic look, I think that the eyes are a bit too large, though it does fit a cartoon-ish style if that's what the goal is. The piece would look more pulled together if, when detailing the neck, you kept the dither-shading a little bit consistent. The nose (around the bottom/in between the nostrils) looks very thin compared to how much the nostrils protrude.

That's all that stood out to me, I hope I'm not looking too much at stuff that you're purposely keeping.

[Terley]

are the eyes too far apart??  ..



well I tweaked some other parts too, trying to get the nose right.