Opinions/Critique?

[Noba]

So using the tips/advice and critique on my last post I came up with this spaceship for the game I'm working on. It's meant to be a sort of cargo ship, and done using simplistic shading/colouring. Can anyone give me some advice or critique on it?



One obvious thing I can think of is making the larger engine's front end fit flush with the spaceship more, since it sort of just "stops" now.

[Xenon02]

Can you please give the full Image without doing screen shots

Upload your image (PNG) here : http://imgur.com/

And I'll try to check what can be changed and about your ship I guess the shading must be a little bit darker and the center Silver (engine) is more extended than your engines so the background of this Silver engine try to shade it a litle bit darker you know the shadows




(I'm here newbie to so if you think that this is not a greate advice you can ignore it )

[Noba]

Can you please give the full Image without doing screen shots

Upload your image (PNG) here : http://imgur.com/

And I'll try to check what can be changed and about your ship I guess the shading must be a little bit darker and the center Silver (engine) is more extended than your engines so the background of this Silver engine try to shade it a litle bit darker you know the shadows




(I'm here newbie to so if you think that this is not a greate advice you can ignore it )

Ah, sorry about that. I can't show just the picture since it was exported in gamemaker, and that's meant to be an er... What do you call it? A door. Basically, since it's a cargoship, although I may get rid of that entirely.

Thanks for the advice so far though!

[Xenon02]

I'm sorry if I offended you I do not know much about ships and I thought the tip would be the door for the boxes and the main door for the crews.

And about the main doors (of course this silver one on the center ) I think it should have lights like you know. In night you need to deliver a really important package and you need to see door, about a shading use darker Orange (use 4 or 5 shades or orange test it)

[Noba]

I'm sorry if I offended you I do not know much about ships and I thought the tip would be the door for the boxes and the main door for the crews.

And about the main doors (of course this silver one on the center ) I think it should have lights like you know. In night you need to deliver a really important package and you need to see door, about a shading use darker Orange (use 4 or 5 shades or orange test it)

Oh no you didn't! I ended up getting rid of the whole thing anyway and making it a lot smaller, also added a few more bits of grey to break up the orange:

Its great

Thanks!

[Xenon02]

It look better now but we can stull get it more light stuffs and shadow stuff. Engine can get more of light stuffs , what does it mean ?





About the light stuff you can read more here http://www.itchy-animation.co.uk/light.htm

Oh and I made some grammatical error in those images sry for any trouble about that

[Noba]

It look better now but we can stull get it more light stuffs and shadow stuff. Engine can get more of light stuffs , what does it mean ?





About the light stuff you can read more here http://www.itchy-animation.co.uk/light.htm

Oh and I made some grammatical error in those images sry for any trouble about that

Thanks! I'll work on that soon, just finishing up a cutscene.

[Xenon02]

Are you doing a video game ?

[cloudlly]

for me looks good now And please show more than pistol in short time! 

[Noba]

Are you doing a video game ?

Yep!

for me looks good now And please show more than pistol in short time! 

What do you mean?