Crit: First time doing pixel Art. How's my first attempt? :S

[Beard]

Hello Everyone,
A friend of mine has a number of game projects and has been looking for an artist to do the graphics for them. They are Pixel art games that will be top down/45d angle arcade games.

He's asked me to do up a sprite and do all the movement frames to see if i can do it.

Here's the front and back of a 64 x 128 sprite.

Love to hear from anyone with experience doing this work. All Constructive crit welcome.

Thanks guys!
Nice to be here.

Beard.

[Macattackk]

I think the cloth and drapery needs the most work. It looks a bit flat. Also in some areas you are using a dark outline and in others you aren't. That aspect seems a bit inconsistent as it doesn't seem to always correspond with shading.

[Lustxful]

I agree with Macattackk. The back calves look undertoned. Also something about the shoulders is throwing me off. I think they look a tad broad in my opinion.