[WIP] Character on next level !!! + Scene

[Xenon02]

Well I did a my mini character so I tried something medium. I'm open for criticism and advices ! ;3



Edit 1 :

Made some color changes + mask and back



Edit 2 :

Anatomic repair + colors



Edit 3 :

Edit done in Pixeljoint ;3

[Xenon02]

First try (Open to any advices ! )



Edit 1 :

Edited a little bit floor (not tu much satisfied)

[Xenon02]

You know what I've changed the Scene because the last one was a little bit weird. Here is "pre-alpha" sketch so yeah ...



Edit 1 :



Edit 2 :

[Lobo Bobo]

I can't quite understand what his head is made of and it seems like something is off with his arms but I don't know exactly what or how... Maybe the negative space you let on the right arm (the one on the front) makes it look too thin and I get "thin"is something from the art style or from the characters, looking at his legs, but it still looks wrong somehow.

I like the colors of the background, the lights and everything on the signs and stuff... The character hands look real cool too!

[Xenon02]

I can't quite understand what his head is made of and it seems like something is off with his arms but I don't know exactly what or how... Maybe the negative space you let on the right arm (the one on the front) makes it look too thin and I get "thin"is something from the art style or from the characters, looking at his legs, but it still looks wrong somehow.

I like the colors of the background, the lights and everything on the signs and stuff... The character hands look real cool too!

Ty for your respond and if I good understand i need to change a little bit the character right ?
 

About the helmet I wanted to create a Bounty Hunter in normal clothes



Some examples with different colors

[Xenon02]

Close to end !

Edit 3 :



I've finally got more time to get it ! It's almost done. What do you think about it ?

[eishiya]

The NPA blur/glow on the "iTN" and "CANTUM" look out of place with the relatively low-colour look of everything else.

The character blends into and gets lost in the background, because the contrast level and value range in the background is the same as (and even higher than!) in the character. Try using lower-contrast colours in the background, at least in those parts of the background that are overlappable by the character (you can still have your bright neon glows high up where the character never overlaps them).

[Xenon02]

How about now ?

[eishiya]

Better, but the windows are still quite high-contrast, as are other parts of the background.

[Xenon02]

Here is my next character (i just didn't wanted to create next post so I'll leave it here)



What do you think about it guys ?