AuthorTopic: [WIP] [CC] Highlander Bullfrog  (Read 1886 times)

Offline Verysillyhats

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[WIP] [CC] Highlander Bullfrog

on: July 20, 2017, 02:58:05 am
Another frog concept for this world I'm building.
Still rather loose but I'm struggling to know whether this one is reading or not.

Open to all kinds of criticism and critique.

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Re: [WIP] [CC] Highlander Bullfrog

Reply #1 on: July 20, 2017, 02:07:11 pm
looks good. The belt buckle could stand out from the belt a little bit more and/or look a bit more metallic but thats a rather small thing :)

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Re: [WIP] [CC] Highlander Bullfrog

Reply #2 on: July 20, 2017, 07:50:31 pm
The design is cool :y:

There are too many shades for every color. The shading of the beard is practically invisible.
There are parts where the ligh shades collide with shadows. It looks kind of weird.
Some shapes aren't clean or are jaggy.

You are overshading stuff. The metallic part of the belt doesn't need 3 rows of 3 different shades.

I cleaned it up a little bit:
« Last Edit: July 20, 2017, 07:52:59 pm by Curly »

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Re: [WIP] [CC] Highlander Bullfrog

Reply #3 on: July 21, 2017, 06:00:07 am
You are so right. This actually really helps my understanding. Thanks!