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Pearl Animation Crit

on: July 21, 2017, 10:03:12 am
Hey, folks!



Anyone got anything to say about this before I continue?
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Re: Pearl Animation Crit

Reply #1 on: July 21, 2017, 11:18:15 am
Leg moves but shoe does not. Looks off that way, some slight squashing may help.
PSA: use imgur
http://pixelation.org/index.php?topic=19838.0 also go suggest on my quest, cmon
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Re: Pearl Animation Crit

Reply #2 on: July 21, 2017, 11:35:37 am
 :P As I thought.

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Re: Pearl Animation Crit

Reply #3 on: July 21, 2017, 11:58:43 am
Update! Hope its better now?

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Re: Pearl Animation Crit

Reply #4 on: July 21, 2017, 12:12:00 pm
Your timing on everything is very stiff. All the action happens on the same frame. You might find it more interesting to offset the motion of some parts by a frame or two. Looking great though ;D

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Re: Pearl Animation Crit

Reply #5 on: July 21, 2017, 02:38:07 pm
Hmm, I did think of that a little...

Made a slight change to the dress, crown and zip/zipper. Has it made a tiny difference at least? Its a bit tricky...