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[Fanart] Frog from Hacky Zack

on: July 03, 2017, 11:50:30 am


An animation I did some time ago (not much) so I wanted to know how can I improve.
Feedback and critique is welcome!

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Re: [Fanart] Frog from Hacky Zack

Reply #1 on: July 03, 2017, 12:45:45 pm
Aww, cute! I really like the squish factor in this.

I'm not good with these things but if it were me I'd give the suit a touch of blue in the shading. There's blue in the backlighting but I'd still give it to the 'core shadow' if I'm using the term right? And I'd make the shading on the skin a bit more red, and give the scarf more purplish shading.

That's just my personal preference, though. I may be talking rubbish.

Otherwise, I think its all fab!

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Re: [Fanart] Frog from Hacky Zack

Reply #2 on: July 03, 2017, 02:01:46 pm
Thanks! If the backlight were another color I would give it a chance to the blue light, it doesn't sound crazy so I don't see why not just to try (it might even look nice with the blue backlight not sure I'm not good with the hue of shadows). The shading in the face it might be better with the redish shadow but since I didn't wanna change the colors of the original scarf of Frog but purple (with other bg of course) would look better. Apreciated!

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Re: [Fanart] Frog from Hacky Zack

Reply #3 on: July 03, 2017, 10:11:55 pm
Pretty good! I'd round his cheek out some though, as it is it makes the squish a bit rougher than it should be!
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