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Re: Need Help with R.P.G Grass

Reply #20 on: November 03, 2006, 12:24:22 am
Major Update. Added cliffs, made a larger variety of water tiles, made some what of a waterfall, might leave it like that I kind of like it.
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Re: Need Help with R.P.G Grass

Reply #21 on: November 03, 2006, 03:17:58 pm
Your cliffs look like walls to me.  It might help the perspective to have the grass overhang the cliff edge more.  Also, either the cliff rocks should show more on the side (I couldn't see the brown of the cliff until I zoomed in) or you should have some cast shadows to show the difference in levels.  Good work so far.
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Re: Need Help with R.P.G Grass

Reply #22 on: November 03, 2006, 10:50:09 pm
Small Update: Made some minor touch ups for the water, and made the cliffs blend more with the ground.
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Re: R.P.G Mockup: Previously Help With R.P.G Grass

Reply #23 on: November 04, 2006, 12:54:26 am
Would it be totally out of line for someone as new as me to comment? Oh well, here I go. I think the cliff needs less contrast. Its the only dark tone there and it stands out a bit much. I'd post an edit, but color selection is still a pretty weak area for me. Awesome work, by the way.

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Re: R.P.G Mockup: Previously Help With R.P.G Grass

Reply #24 on: November 04, 2006, 03:59:49 am
Dont edit it yet cause I gotta' nother' update.

Update to cliffs and waterfall.
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Re: R.P.G Mockup

Reply #25 on: November 04, 2006, 04:53:06 am
That waterfall makes no sense.
I didn't really follow tile restrictions, nor is it the best edit, mainly just to show you...


The 'waves' in the waterfall give it a sense of motion, and it's got a form. A two feet deep river doesn't have 'blobs' of water coming down.

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Re: R.P.G Mockup

Reply #26 on: November 05, 2006, 03:47:07 pm
Thanks but the waterfalls were supposed to look like they were kind of dried up, But I might make it like that. Thanks.
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Re: R.P.G Mockup

Reply #27 on: November 05, 2006, 04:00:34 pm
well gravity can't just stop working beacause you want the waterfall to look dried up, there's quite a bit of water looming over the end of the cliff, it's bound to fall, thats how waterfalls work I Am Uh.



I suggest adding some rocks blocking off the bulk of the water if you want..

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Re: R.P.G Mockup

Reply #28 on: November 06, 2006, 05:20:16 am
The leftmost edge of the elevated area really bugs me. I'd assume there wouldn't be grass down there, it'd just be a wall of rock that goes down into the water.

Sherman's edit looks nice, I suggest you take it into account. :y:

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Re: R.P.G Mockup

Reply #29 on: November 07, 2006, 04:46:36 am
well gravity can't just stop working beacause you want the waterfall to look dried up, there's quite a bit of water looming over the end of the cliff, it's bound to fall, thats how waterfalls work Rerg  :lol:
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Something between your waterfall and Gills would be cool.