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Offline Raven Foxx

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[C+C] Avatar help?

on: May 28, 2017, 02:29:24 am







Do these look okay?

Offline Aniki

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Re: [C+C] Avatar help?

Reply #1 on: May 28, 2017, 10:16:11 am
Your colors and lighting are nice, but you need to devote more time into the silhouette and outlines of your sprites. You have a lot of "jaggies" in your outlines, the curves are discontinuous rather than smooth, and lines fluctuate in thickness.

This page has some information about jaggies, and also a section on cleaning up an outline. I think if you made your outlines more carefully and spent more time rounding out your shapes so they are smooth rather than lumpy, you'll notice a huge improvement in all of your art