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FLYING NINJA!

on: October 22, 2006, 04:08:36 am


This is probably my best so far!! I made a video on it its in the Video Thread in General.
Im gonna re-make this and add a bit more texture and detail to it but CNC so far.

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Re: FLYING NINJA!

Reply #1 on: October 22, 2006, 04:27:13 am
-Pecs look like boobs.
-No obvious elbow.
-Head seems to be split down the middle for some reason. Why did you do that, out of curiousity? :-\
-Lighting on the headband seems to be a little... off.
-There's no crotch area at all.
-The lower portion of the leg [under the knee] could be a little bigger.
-There's dark outlines on the character, but not on the weapon, so it looks out of place.
-I don't really get what the black patch below the belt is supposed to be.

Aaaand that's about it for now. It would look considerably better with a fixed up pallete, as well...

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Re: FLYING NINJA!

Reply #2 on: October 22, 2006, 04:40:14 am
Yes, your 100% right, as I said Im going to remake this because I really liked this version, but a tuned up will defenetly look alot better. I made no crotch area because they were supposed to be jeans and he has a mask on his head. Which I showed no detail for what so ever..

And your the 2nd person to tell me his pex look like boobs :lol:
Thats freaking halarious!! :P

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Re: FLYING NINJA!

Reply #3 on: October 22, 2006, 08:25:59 am
Did you mirror it and add a bandana?  It looks too obvious to deny as the lightsources are whack.  No need for crits, since mccow stated all that I see.

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Re: FLYING NINJA!

Reply #4 on: October 22, 2006, 01:55:12 pm
The overall shading looks kinda messy.
And it'sobviously flipped. The lightsources are wonkey.
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Re: FLYING NINJA!

Reply #5 on: October 22, 2006, 03:56:39 pm
I did flip since I was rushed. I basicly had a deadline for this. They had a power outage back here and I wanted to finish it before the lights went out.