To be frank, I don't really like your edit Victor.
So I made my own.
Notes:
-His right sleeve was there, his right arm was not.
-Wasted colors; the dark blue and the black are virtually identical [on my monitor at least]. Made the whole thing flow a bit better by using similar colors for everything.
-The shorts curved strangely at the bottom, so I fixed that, added detail to the shorts.
-Made the legs a little thicker.
-Made some color changes, edit has one color less than yours.
-Changed the head. That was mostly a style thing.
-Moved the mouth.
EDIT: I do realise now that the legs are messed up on my edit. Oh well.