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Offline SolidIdea

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Naked Snake @ Okami World

on: October 21, 2006, 08:36:50 pm
Long time no see  :)

I did this for a "cosplay contest"



Snake with Amaterasu camo  :D

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Critics and comments? ( as always  :P )

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Re: Naked Snake @ Okami World

Reply #1 on: October 21, 2006, 10:01:09 pm
lol That's cool. (*Warning* off topic.....ish>>>) Is that game Okami any good?? Umm, It looks like he's holding something in his right hand but I don't see what it is...
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Re: Naked Snake @ Okami World

Reply #2 on: October 22, 2006, 02:17:56 am
Its a grenade, his stance is off by alot. Is he leaning forward or standing?

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Re: Naked Snake @ Okami World

Reply #3 on: October 22, 2006, 02:22:31 am
TheAbyss:

Thank you. And I was going to do him holding a gun, but I left him weaponless
(off: its pretty good, almost awesome)

VictorR:

There is no grenade, and his is leaning forward ( not to the screen, towards the side he is looking )

Adarias:

I fixed the arm, but I won't post yet, I feel like revamping him from ground up.
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Re: Naked Snake @ Okami World

Reply #4 on: October 22, 2006, 02:22:39 am
grenade? where did you get that idea? i thought it was the brush head from the game?

but yeah, i think the stance will be helped a lot by moving the shoulders, arms, and head portion back left and redrawing the torso accordingly.  also, the right arm is too long, i think bringing the elbow in a little will help this as well

i like the concept of this
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Re: Naked Snake @ Okami World

Reply #5 on: October 22, 2006, 04:44:33 am
Looks like a grenade, Ill do an edit.

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Re: Naked Snake @ Okami World

Reply #6 on: October 22, 2006, 07:29:52 am
You know, that's really not necessary.

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Re: Naked Snake @ Okami World

Reply #7 on: October 22, 2006, 05:44:25 pm
"Naked Snake @ Okami World"                  :hehe:

Good consept. You need to work on his posture though. He's leaning his upperbody forward, but has his feet in an idle stance that's not tilted in the same direction. His arms, hands and head might need a little tweaking as well. Tried to do a quick example:



Removed the spike on the cameo to show the shoulder. This is at least what I guess you were aiming for as a pose. I could be wrong.

Hope it helps.

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Re: Naked Snake @ Okami World

Reply #8 on: October 22, 2006, 09:45:06 pm
His arms are too long for his legs, elongate his lower half.
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Re: Naked Snake @ Okami World

Reply #9 on: October 22, 2006, 10:28:32 pm
Adarias:

Thank you  ;D I fixed the arm, but I won't post yet, I feel like revamping him from ground up.  ;D

VictorR:

Well, if you feel like it, do it  :). But I see why you saw a grenade.

Gnarf:

 ;) Kinda haha

Snake:

 ;D Thank you too.
I was trying to do like he was rotating his upper body. I did the pose myself, but when I started pixelling, I messed the legs up.
I appreciated your edit, and I'll try to fix the points you've made.

Godslayer:

Thank you  :) Yeah, his proportions are messed up, because that's how the game is, but I didn't quite manage (i'm really off  :lol: ) to imitate the art style