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Offline RiverOaken

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GBC Beam Kirby

on: February 24, 2017, 04:22:22 am
I have made thousands of spritesheets, but I wanted some critique on this sprite I made awhile back. I decided to draw the ability hub from Kirby's Adventure, in the style of the Gameboy Color. I am most upset with the background of it. It seems so bland, and boring. I've always been been bad at backgrounds.
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Re: GBC Beam Kirby

Reply #1 on: February 24, 2017, 06:28:44 am
I don't think it really needs one, any more detail would obscure it too much.
Also, your image link is borked! Retry without the /a in the middle and a .png at the end!
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Re: GBC Beam Kirby

Reply #2 on: February 24, 2017, 06:37:07 am
Sorry. I just always feel there's something wrong with my drawings, and I really want to make things flashy. Thanks for the advice though.

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Re: GBC Beam Kirby

Reply #3 on: February 24, 2017, 06:56:03 am
Oh no, the feeling is perfectly understandable. It's good to temper it with those outside perspectives! In this case though, I'm approaching this from a mechanical angle! If you added a background to it it would make it too visually cluttered to easily tell what power it is during gameplay!
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Re: GBC Beam Kirby

Reply #4 on: February 24, 2017, 09:22:22 am
I'm not seeing any image, can you try uploading it again? I click "Get share link" and then "bb code" box and copy the whole thing in after uploading to imgur.

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Re: GBC Beam Kirby

Reply #5 on: February 24, 2017, 10:08:53 am
I'm not seeing any image, can you try uploading it again? I click "Get share link" and then "bb code" box and copy the whole thing in after uploading to imgur.


Here, fixed for you!
PSA: use imgur
http://pixelation.org/index.php?topic=19838.0 also go suggest on my quest, cmon
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