Actually I would keep emphasis on the top eyelid movement, the bottom does come up to meet it slightly but the majority of the blinking movement is by the upper eyelid.

Here, in addition to being funny this showcases the concept well.
Second, the anatomy needs tweaking. The thighs seem to trail off into nothing, and the legs don't have much form to them! Sucky as it can be to learn,ALL good stylization is founded upon a strong understanding of anatomy. See samurai jack and disney's motorcity for examples of teo ends on the style spectrum, you can best see the concept in action through their art styles because they start with strong anatomical understanding and push and tweak from their to keep their look clean and pretty!