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TheForgottenOne
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Forest guardian
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January 07, 2017, 01:40:20 am
Hello!
i need feedback for this pixel art.
I got a version with line and one without it, I want to know which of the two is better. and what is wrong in it
With Line:
Without line:
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ChillTaco
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Re: Forest guardian
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January 07, 2017, 05:05:44 am
I like without lines a lot better. Just a personal liking for that kind of pixel. I suppose with line might contrast bettter if the greens of the forest are to simular. buuuutttt, blending in with the forest may suit the character.
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astrofra
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Re: Forest guardian
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January 16, 2017, 06:56:30 am
Without line is 10times better
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Double7
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Re: Forest guardian
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January 16, 2017, 07:30:12 am
I really think the not outlined one is better. All i would suggest for this is to make the face a bit darker so that it contrasts a bit and gives a hooded feel with some cool glowing eyes.
All preference. What you have is great
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TheForgottenOne
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Re: Forest guardian
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January 18, 2017, 04:08:15 am
Thanks for the feedback!
I do this edit:
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lachrymose
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Re: Forest guardian
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January 18, 2017, 02:22:23 pm
To many straight lines, organic forms are generally more curvey. Especially leaves.
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Friend
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Re: Forest guardian
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January 18, 2017, 11:25:20 pm
I find the straight lines charming in this case. I love the design. Things that for certain could be better is removing the banding and better AA. Subjective fixes I'd suggest is perhaps rethinking color and light. I imagine you can really make this character stand out with more glowey and atmospheric light and color. I envision it particularly with more luminescent eyes
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