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Offline Kennethfejer

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some new stuff

on: October 15, 2006, 09:25:45 pm
haven't posted in a while, been too busy at work :/ , but i managed to put some stuff together today.
let me know what you think : )

the haunted swamp


Girl with cellphone



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Re: some new stuff

Reply #1 on: October 15, 2006, 09:30:12 pm
great stuff :D  love the haunted swamp, though i'm not sure what the purple power meter is for on the bottom, and it takes up a lot of room compared to the health meter and stuff.  the girl is great too, especially her face and hair, I think i'd prefer a different shirt though, that one looks a little drafty...

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Re: some new stuff

Reply #2 on: October 15, 2006, 09:40:34 pm
Nice trees, little slime dude is really cute, reminds me of the Rocket Slime game on the Ninty DS.

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Re: some new stuff

Reply #3 on: October 15, 2006, 09:46:59 pm
f. great! that haunted swamp is  :y: :y: :y:, vivid colors, top design (espc. the trees) and lovely creatures. What really does it for me though is, that everytime i see one of your mockups i can picture the actual game and wanna play it

minor crits:
- the main charactor seems to blend in with the bg a bit too much, mayby another swordcolor would do it, since the current one is pretty close to the water color
- the color of the cell-girls top is a bit too saturated for my taste

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Re: some new stuff

Reply #4 on: October 15, 2006, 10:23:52 pm
 Wow this is awesome, I am glad you made new works.

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Re: some new stuff

Reply #5 on: October 15, 2006, 11:23:38 pm
That swamp is all kinds of awesome. :y:
The hero's legs are out of perspective though, and could do with being rotated to the left along the x-axis.

A quick example where I only moved his right foot because that was the quickest and easiest way to illustrate my point.

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Re: some new stuff

Reply #6 on: October 15, 2006, 11:47:53 pm
god damn I love you work ken.  excellent stuff here.  the mockup looks very "spooky"ish.  the girl looks great, but nothing id look at more than twice.

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Re: some new stuff

Reply #7 on: October 15, 2006, 11:58:53 pm
Great trees, and I like the guy's shield.
And Faceless, I think they should be bent.
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Re: some new stuff

Reply #8 on: October 16, 2006, 12:24:58 am
My edit wasn't about straightening the legs, it was about the placement of the feet. I was just too lazy to do anything more than drag them around and change a few pixels.

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Re: some new stuff

Reply #9 on: October 16, 2006, 02:19:46 am
Well, Faceless already pointed out the first thing I saw, so I'll just say that I think the sword's blade blends to the water too much. The way the shield faces straight at the viewer like that bugs me a bit, but it makes sense, I can see.
I ditto Joseph about the girl.
Awesome trees. :o
The nearest little weed to the yellow blob (not the one blocked by the character) looks like it has a misplaced blue (trasparent?) pixel on the toppest leaf.
Hmmm...That's it.
Real great schtuff. I remember that looking at your stuff a couple years ago is what first got me into making mockups.