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Offline Rhubarbist

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[WIP] [CC] Space Monkey Mafia

on: November 21, 2016, 11:20:55 pm


Could use some feedback, something feels off.

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Re: [WIP] [CC] Space Monkey Mafia

Reply #1 on: November 22, 2016, 03:51:26 am
I know exactly what feels off.

Give that padrino-monkey a moustache, give it to him, don't ask, just GIVE IT TO HIM.
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Re: [WIP] [CC] Space Monkey Mafia

Reply #2 on: November 22, 2016, 04:37:39 am
The wrist MIGHT be angled too far upwards for the arm length of a monkey, perhaps? makes it look like his elbow goes straight into his wrist.
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http://pixelation.org/index.php?topic=19838.0 also go suggest on my quest, cmon
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Re: [WIP] [CC] Space Monkey Mafia

Reply #3 on: November 22, 2016, 06:00:21 am
Yeah, when you take off the hand it looks like everything is in order.



just a little repositioning kinda solved the problem.
the original placement feels off when you try to guess the position of the arm.
you can also add an extra highlight [like in this edit] as a way to help the viewer visualize it.