SilverAgain!

[sharprm]

Hey, did an edit hope you don't mind. Thought the arms looked wrong, thought only way you would see them like that is from above
so i tried doing the whole piece from that angle (ran into problems doing the legs). Even if you don't go for the top down angle, I
recommend changing the pose of his right hand and making the bottom of his face smaller.



Silhouette idea is stolen from baccaman21.

[Opacus]

Sharpm: The edit doesn't really let the perspective pop out, he looks more like a midget, rather then a ninja viewed half top-down now.

[sharprm]

Sharpm: The edit doesn't really let the perspective pop out, he looks more like a midget, rather then a ninja viewed half top-down now.

yeah ... well ... the edit shows the hand would look better with a claw pose and that a smaller head looks better. Anyway, MIDGET NINJAS are scary because they can flip out and kill you at any moment.   

[Opacus]

yeah ... well ... the edit shows the hand would look better with a claw pose and that a smaller head looks better. Anyway, MIDGET NINJAS are scary because they can flip out and kill you at any moment.   

I didn't notice the hand, but the hand is indeed improved 

[Silver]

Huge Thanks for the edit Sharprm!
Could you translate the Japanees word there for me please, it's giving great theme to the piece!
Ill Edit this later 

[Ninkazu]

It's actually Chinese. For "You!"

[gliding]

@silver, I suggest creating a full silhouette  that reads well before you begin to add colour.

@ RYU- lovely rendering of the muscle- maybew elongating the torso first would help?


I feel like editing (may I ?)

(*sry XD)

[Silver]

Sure! Take your take! 
BTW, Thanks Ninkazu.

[Ryumaru]

gliding, i dont think .takam has posted in this topic.

[gliding]

Fixed~

[excuse my ditziness]