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[C+C] How does this idle animation look?

on: September 20, 2016, 06:07:39 pm
This is an idle animation for a trampoline enemy for my game.


Something about her feels off to me, but I'm not sure what.

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Re: [C+C] How does this idle animation look?

Reply #1 on: September 20, 2016, 09:06:14 pm
Why do her hair buns move like that? Can't see any reason they'd slide over like they are there.
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Re: [C+C] How does this idle animation look?

Reply #2 on: September 20, 2016, 10:27:21 pm
Her hair buns look too static while the rest of her body bounce in place.
Would you think animating the buns in the opposite direction help?

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Re: [C+C] How does this idle animation look?

Reply #3 on: September 20, 2016, 10:51:26 pm
Try to have it follow the head more I think,as it is it feels like there wasnt much thought put into how it would move just that it HAD to move.
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Re: [C+C] How does this idle animation look?

Reply #4 on: September 20, 2016, 11:54:11 pm
Ok, how is this?


I sped it up some a little bit.
« Last Edit: September 21, 2016, 12:04:12 am by Vivid »

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Re: [C+C] How does this idle animation look?

Reply #5 on: September 21, 2016, 01:08:54 am
Looking better! I tweaked it a bit, all I really did was made the buns bob a bit as she bottoms out.

EDIT: shit dopplering christ network what
I didn't even upload that until an hour after I posted this tweak, how did that even happen
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« Last Edit: September 21, 2016, 06:45:37 am by MysteryMeat »
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Re: [C+C] How does this idle animation look?

Reply #6 on: September 21, 2016, 01:35:12 am
Delaying the bun bounce one frame or two may look good.
Mysterymeat, that was one big tweak :P

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Re: [C+C] How does this idle animation look?

Reply #7 on: September 21, 2016, 06:41:11 pm
Oh boy, that tweak makes her looks more bouncey.

PS: Nice Pin up. :y: