another one

[Bunn]

my third pixel stuff...  this time a larger one... i tried to cut some collors, using just 2 or 3 for each...uhh... thing...anyway >_<  tel me wath you think about it, good? bad? any advices? critics?.. i want to hear what you have to say.. even if its jus a ''YOU SUCK!'' coment XD

ps: the char is Vash the Stampede from Trigun Maximum

[Sherman Gill]

Anatomy is quite a bit off. He's got his hand on his hip which is more to the right than his ear. And the glasses are hard to distinguish, make's him look like Vash-Geordi ('This assasin has a high concentration of energy fluctuations!').

Just, please do something with the glasses, and make his waist bigger and less snake-man like.

[Jimish]

Doesn't Vash normally hold his gun in his right hand? lol.

[Bunn]

i like doing small hips, and the artist draw it like this too, but ill see what i can do, and ill try fixing the glasses too.

and yes, he holds the gun with his right arm, i just put it on the left one because it would make a more stylish pose XD

[Pawige]

Just a few quit crits before I get back to work:
The way his chest and hand is positioned makes him look pregnant. Flip the image horizontally and you'll get a totally fresh look at it. I can't really find a useful reference image, but it looks like his head is a bit too small. The perspective on the shoes doesn't match. The uber-dark red outlines aren't really serving any purpose.

[Sherman Gill]

But is Vash a snake man? I couldn't think of a good way to put this and apparently my sucky way of putting it didn't work ...
His belly and hips go out farther than his chest, which is incredibly wierd as his hips are so small.