Andronaut

[Godslayer]

New avatar WIP. I've barely touched his- chest, overall AAing- just as background.

Based on the Andronaut character concept I've been developing-

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/5117/noooeeepl9.png
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/7049/andronautbd5.jpg

[Helm]

Hello, I think this is wonderful. All I see left to do is AA and some highlights. May I edit the palette for kicks?

[Godslayer]

Go for it.

This darned school thing...keeping me from the andronaut...

[Helm]

besides color variation, there's a lot of saturation and lightness difference, and I tried to do some more volumetric clarification

[Godslayer]

You're a tough act to follow, Helm.

[Xion]

Schweet. The far part of the arm looks wonky on the inner edge. Kinda like jaggies along the edge of the hilight. The opposite side looks lumpy, too.
IMHO, the hands' symmetry looked better in the sketches.

[Helm]

But you're neglecting the crits. Where's the light coming from in the armpit? Still missing aa, and shouldn't the socket of the arm be darker?

[Godslayer]

Im not reglecting the crits, the problem is just that Im working slowly and I have alot of stuff to do right now. Believe me, they'll be included in the final piece, but that may only come when I can get a day of rest. You dont have to tell me twice, the reason it is unupdated is because I simply havent got to those parts yet.

And under the arm pit, the light is coming from behind him, the arm doesnt effect it. I think.

[Dogmeat]

Wow GS, you've gotten so much better in the last few years, I really like the artistic style of your piece, the multi-fingers, the shading, everything. I agree with Helm about AA, but otherwise, wow.