Failed Paladin

[Bollie]

The pitchfork is what sets him apart from other paladins

[BadMoodTaylor]

The pitchfork is what sets him apart from other paladins

Separates him from other Paladins like the wheat he separates from the chaff

...on his days off from Paladinning, of course

...or is he a Paladin on his days off from farming?

[had0c]

Thank you all for the great advice! I added more contrast and worked on the shading, i fixed the proportions, made the head smaller and added more SWOOSH! 

What do you think now?

lacks depth try adding an outline "not black thou"

wolfenoctis's example is a fine one. outline in non highlighted areas

[Bollie]

Thank you all for the great advice! I added more contrast and worked on the shading, i fixed the proportions, made the head smaller and added more SWOOSH! 

What do you think now?

lacks depth try adding an outline "not black thou"

wolfenoctis's example is a fine one. outline in non highlighted areas

Hmm, you think the outline helps add depth?

[BadMoodTaylor]

I think it's not a bad addition except for the banding on the pitchfork is noticeable.

[fingas10]

Outlines and a basic spear

[Bollie]

I think it's not a bad addition except for the banding on the pitchfork is noticeable.

Yeah, i see that being a problem.