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Re: Failed Paladin

Reply #10 on: September 02, 2016, 04:44:53 pm
The pitchfork is what sets him apart from other paladins ;)

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Re: Failed Paladin

Reply #11 on: September 02, 2016, 04:47:05 pm
The pitchfork is what sets him apart from other paladins ;)

Separates him from other Paladins like the wheat he separates from the chaff

...on his days off from Paladinning, of course

...or is he a Paladin on his days off from farming?
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Re: Failed Paladin

Reply #12 on: September 02, 2016, 05:16:19 pm
Thank you all for the great advice! I added more contrast and worked on the shading, i fixed the proportions, made the head smaller and added more SWOOSH!  ;D

What do you think now?
lacks depth try adding an outline "not black thou"

wolfenoctis's example is a fine one. outline in non highlighted areas
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Re: Failed Paladin

Reply #13 on: September 03, 2016, 01:49:58 pm
Thank you all for the great advice! I added more contrast and worked on the shading, i fixed the proportions, made the head smaller and added more SWOOSH!  ;D

What do you think now?
lacks depth try adding an outline "not black thou"

wolfenoctis's example is a fine one. outline in non highlighted areas

Hmm, you think the outline helps add depth?

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Re: Failed Paladin

Reply #14 on: September 03, 2016, 09:40:13 pm
I think it's not a bad addition except for the banding on the pitchfork is noticeable.
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Re: Failed Paladin

Reply #15 on: September 03, 2016, 10:34:55 pm
Outlines and a basic spear

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Re: Failed Paladin

Reply #16 on: September 04, 2016, 05:52:42 am
I think it's not a bad addition except for the banding on the pitchfork is noticeable.
Yeah, i see that being a problem.