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fly boy, watcha think?

on: August 05, 2016, 04:41:37 pm


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Re: fly boy, watcha think?

Reply #1 on: August 06, 2016, 01:43:41 pm
I don't like too much the way the shape of the wings change as if flaps..

And there's a delay to the animation, it gets slow when the character opens its mouth, and then speeds up when it closes, try to make it all the same speed.

And it looks like this thing is just swinging its arms, not flapping.
This is what I see:

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Re: fly boy, watcha think?

Reply #2 on: August 07, 2016, 02:17:04 am
thanks, ill make some adjustments
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