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First pixel walk cycle, Feedback welcome

on: August 04, 2016, 09:17:38 pm


Hi Folks,

This monk strut is my first pixel walk cycle. Any feedback?

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Re: First pixel walk cycle, Feedback welcome

Reply #1 on: August 04, 2016, 09:24:03 pm
He's kind of twitchy, try to re-align the frames so he stays mostly level. with himself. The arm and lantern are already fine, but there's a lot of very noticeable jitter on everything left of the shoulder.
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Re: First pixel walk cycle, Feedback welcome

Reply #2 on: August 04, 2016, 09:29:35 pm
He's kind of twitchy, try to re-align the frames so he stays mostly level. with himself. The arm and lantern are already fine, but there's a lot of very noticeable jitter on everything left of the shoulder.

Thanks chief, I see what you mean. I'm still getting used to the pixel tools and process.
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