I loved the other thread, and I'm very excited to see the final product come out of this.
I hate yellow, a lot. It doesn't look good on me when I wear it, and it's sometimes a pain to shade. Right now, it's not shiny enough and the colors look bland. If you're going for gold (which you obviously are), I would recommend hue-shifting towards an orangey-red, also highlighting with extremely light colours, gold is supposed to be shiny.
The bar on top looks like breakfast fun-times while the bar on the bottom can read more as gold. Keep in mind that gold actually reflects any surface that you put it on, so the bar on the bottom is actually shiny breakfast fun-times.
