AuthorTopic: I made a bathtub animation(my first) , what do you think?  (Read 2978 times)

Offline Nagariku

  • 0001
  • *
  • Posts: 8
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • Nagariku
    • View Profile
So I made an animation for Pixel Dailies, first attempt at pixel animation, any tips or changes?

New pixel artists can't even triforce

Offline MysteryMeat

  • 0100
  • ***
  • Posts: 1997
  • Karma: +1/-0
  • "The new alternative to q-tipping your cat!"
    • mysterymeat
    • spoiledmysterymeat
    • View Profile
    • My rad art blog!

Re: I made a bathtub animation(my first) , what do you think?

Reply #1 on: June 05, 2016, 11:07:04 am
that tub's pretty full, would probably overflow at that point
PSA: use imgur
http://pixelation.org/index.php?topic=19838.0 also go suggest on my quest, cmon
MAJOR BORK TALLY: |

Offline Nagariku

  • 0001
  • *
  • Posts: 8
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • Nagariku
    • View Profile

Re: I made a bathtub animation(my first) , what do you think?

Reply #2 on: June 05, 2016, 11:30:10 am
that tub's pretty full, would probably overflow at that point

Tried to make it seem less full, but it seems that I failed

P.S. Made bubbles follow through

New pixel artists can't even triforce

Offline MysteryMeat

  • 0100
  • ***
  • Posts: 1997
  • Karma: +1/-0
  • "The new alternative to q-tipping your cat!"
    • mysterymeat
    • spoiledmysterymeat
    • View Profile
    • My rad art blog!

Re: I made a bathtub animation(my first) , what do you think?

Reply #3 on: June 05, 2016, 10:01:58 pm
Here, I did up a quick thing to fix it towards what I meant. What I did was move the water down some and toss in a darker shade to represent the inner wall of the tub.
I also sped it up apparently, but that was kind of an accidental thing as I thought I'd somehow mucked up the framerate while messing around with it.
PSA: use imgur
http://pixelation.org/index.php?topic=19838.0 also go suggest on my quest, cmon
MAJOR BORK TALLY: |

Offline SmashAdams

  • 0001
  • *
  • Posts: 31
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • View Profile

Re: I made a bathtub animation(my first) , what do you think?

Reply #4 on: June 06, 2016, 04:24:53 am
Here, I did up a quick thing to fix it towards what I meant. What I did was move the water down some and toss in a darker shade to represent the inner wall of the tub.
I also sped it up apparently, but that was kind of an accidental thing as I thought I'd somehow mucked up the framerate while messing around with it.


that inner tub wall shadow is everything

Offline Xer0bot

  • 0001
  • *
  • Posts: 43
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • View Profile

Re: I made a bathtub animation(my first) , what do you think?

Reply #5 on: June 06, 2016, 12:13:15 pm
Now make it ten times bigger. :p

Offline Nagariku

  • 0001
  • *
  • Posts: 8
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • Nagariku
    • View Profile

Re: I made a bathtub animation(my first) , what do you think?

Reply #6 on: June 06, 2016, 12:34:22 pm
Nice, looks much better than mine, still wondering what the white stuff is on the wall
New pixel artists can't even triforce

Offline MysteryMeat

  • 0100
  • ***
  • Posts: 1997
  • Karma: +1/-0
  • "The new alternative to q-tipping your cat!"
    • mysterymeat
    • spoiledmysterymeat
    • View Profile
    • My rad art blog!

Re: I made a bathtub animation(my first) , what do you think?

Reply #7 on: June 06, 2016, 08:31:30 pm
it was in the original, i assumed it was water froth
PSA: use imgur
http://pixelation.org/index.php?topic=19838.0 also go suggest on my quest, cmon
MAJOR BORK TALLY: |