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Offline Vicipower

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[WIP] Jellyfish scene

on: May 29, 2016, 12:20:36 pm


I'd need a bit of feedback on this, even though its not even close to being finished but I'd love to fix mistakes early (if thats possibleee).
I feel as if the flowers don't really bring much attention to the eye but Idk how I'd be able to fix it. Changing the grass isn't really something I'd like to do but yeaeaeaaa

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Re: [WIP] Jellyfish scene

Reply #1 on: May 31, 2016, 01:01:11 am
Looks amazing in my opinion :)

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Re: [WIP] Jellyfish scene

Reply #2 on: May 31, 2016, 01:21:28 am
might help to put in a blue bg to tie the colors together.
as for the flowers, I'd actually recommend a slight amount of blurring to make them look closer to the camera.
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Re: [WIP] Jellyfish scene

Reply #3 on: May 31, 2016, 10:07:57 pm
You're way better than I am, but for the flowers thing, they are pretty smooth as far as shading goes in addition to the fact that they have a similar color to what's behind them. If you don't want to change colors, perhaps adding more contrast to the flowers would bring them out a little bit more? Just a thought.