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tricolor cyclops[C+C]

on: April 16, 2016, 01:32:55 am

it has three colors, it's a tricolor cyclops
ran into a barrier so asking for feedback
EDIT: after a PPDEdit i improve

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Re: tricolor cyclops[C+C]

Reply #1 on: May 06, 2016, 04:35:29 pm
Bunp  :(

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Re: tricolor cyclops[C+C]

Reply #2 on: May 06, 2016, 05:09:02 pm
I like it and I don't really have much critic but I'm just going to say the little things I noticed:
I don't thing the 2 pixels between the legs ,going to left make much sense.
The top pixels of the head part looks a bit abrupt for me (might just be me lol)
Also the zipper and the lines on the legs looks a bit weird to me.no clue how to make it better tho'.

Well this wasn't really anything worth posting but I hope it helps anyways :D
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Re: tricolor cyclops[C+C]

Reply #3 on: May 12, 2016, 07:57:20 pm
I don't thing the 2 pixels between the legs ,going to left make much sense.
those are a compromise, if i remove them it looks way worse
The top pixels of the head part looks a bit abrupt for me (might just be me lol)
hum, agreed
Also the zipper and the lines on the legs looks a bit weird to me.no clue how to make it better tho'.
hum, a small nitpick,
although fixed