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Re: mah character.

Reply #20 on: September 25, 2006, 01:20:57 am
Better already. Don't forget to elongate the far arm.

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Re: mah character.

Reply #21 on: September 25, 2006, 10:00:13 am
Next time try some hue-shifts(?) and show the creases in shading, not in the lineart.

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Re: mah character.

Reply #22 on: September 25, 2006, 08:02:11 pm
i think i finished it... although i don't like how the body turned out, i don't do too well with folds. but i'm getting better at least.

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Re: mah character.

Reply #23 on: September 25, 2006, 08:41:40 pm


1. Fixed the black outlines, and touched up some minor details.

2. Ignore the nose, I just was testing what it would look like and it turned out good.

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Re: mah character.

Reply #24 on: September 25, 2006, 08:45:28 pm


1. Fixed the black outlines, and touched up some minor details.

2. Ignore the nose, I just was testing what it would look like and it turned out good.
the nose is already there. i use a line of shading to show it.... your edit kind of ruins it..

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Re: mah character.

Reply #25 on: September 25, 2006, 08:52:36 pm
The small highlight line does not show the nose well, even if it is anime style. You could use a highlight instead of a shadow, but maybe try showing the top of the bridge of the nose if you want a nose in the picture. I thought you had overlooked it on purpose, so sorry for clashing with your creativity, but do like I said, ignore the nose I did, I was just giving you something to think about.

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Re: mah character.

Reply #26 on: September 25, 2006, 08:57:17 pm
The small highlight line does not show the nose well, even if it is anime style. You could use a highlight instead of a shadow, but maybe try showing the top of the bridge of the nose if you want a nose in the picture. I thought you had overlooked it on purpose, so sorry for clashing with your creativity, but do like I said, ignore the nose I did, I was just giving you something to think about.
there is a higlight on there.... i should probably lighten it... but yeah, i'll try to add some more shadow to it

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Re: mah character.

Reply #27 on: September 25, 2006, 09:04:16 pm
Yeah, a bit more contrast would help, but the highlight itself don't... how do I put it, it just doesn't say "nose".

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Re: mah character.

Reply #28 on: September 25, 2006, 09:08:29 pm
Yeah, a bit more contrast would help, but the highlight itself don't... how do I put it, it just doesn't say "nose".
better?

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Re: mah character.

Reply #29 on: September 25, 2006, 10:48:05 pm
Is he supposed to be missing the eye? Not sure on that one...

As for the nose, not really, now his face looks blotchy.