I need help with my monkey

[0nepixel]

 

[Seiseki]

Cute, but you need the address to the image itself to use it with [img] tags.
Rightclick -> copy image address (in chrome, probably similar in other browsers)

[0nepixel]

ups sorry for that 

[Seiseki]

Some quick thoughts..
I don't think the way you draw the mouth/nose makes sense for monkeys.
The palette is also a bit weak, certain colors don't have enough impact and there is quite a lot of color banding (areas where two colors are right next to each other and form noticeable bands.)

[0nepixel]

  thanks!

[Decroded]

just wondering if that original mouth more of a cute anime expression than trying to draw an actual monkey's mouth?
it kinda looks like what u see a character's face change to sometimes in those silly style animes.

[Seiseki]

I thought about that as well, but I wasn't convinced because the middle part went up so far.



Here's another edit because monkeys are fun :3

[0nepixel]

omg, so good, thanks a lot seiseki