AuthorTopic: WIP painting for MOTHER 3's tenth anniversary. Critique on composition/rendering  (Read 3765 times)

Offline Prism

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Most of the backdrop is done and Lucas' base shades have been put in (no real lighting is on him yet), but I'm not against any radical changes.

earlier version:
original lineart: (it portrays more of a windswept moment than the colored version, I think)
« Last Edit: June 19, 2016, 10:02:58 am by Prism »

Offline Probo

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looking really good mate. thought of putting something in the top left sky? like a flock of birds or something? or a flying saucer XD

also the sunflower that is overlapping his back seems like it should be behind him, to my eye? to plant him in the scene