AuthorTopic: Colorful pastel mockup of a 2D platformer. Yoshi's Island influenced.  (Read 2033 times)

Offline Gizmonicgamer

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[the flower in this was done by my associate and isn't final; don't worry about that]





any crits or thoughts? i feel like i'm having trouble organizing the colors correctly, especially between the cliffside and the grass surrounding it. i'm not quite sure how to proceed with that discomfort, or if its even necessarily validated.
« Last Edit: January 17, 2016, 07:12:13 pm by Gizmonicgamer »

Offline Pusty

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I like the colors! But the left side of the 2. image looks off (the tiles seem very easy to see)
Just a random hobby gamedev passing by O:
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any better?

Offline Mr_Hk_

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Super cool mood and colors.
Yet it feels a little bleach out and hard to read.
I feel like you need some lower values to add more contrasts.

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You really nailed those happy little colors.
I like that it feels like you used a brush to paint those pixels, they're more shape oriented rather than 'specifically placed'.

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I don't know if it might help, but here is a quick color grading.