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[IncorrigibleBoozehound]

Thank you for feedback.

Here is new piece. I still think it is a little bit too small. What do you think?

It took me a while to make this. I'm just afraid that if I go bigger, it might took me too long, as I need entire game world same standard.

The texturing doesn't fit the aesthetic of your previous images imo, which are what I think you should stick to if you want your game's art style to be consistent. I think you should keep things fairly "solid" like you were before. You probably only need 3 tones for each material (mid, highlight, shadow).

[KB90]

Hi. Thanks for critique. I'm still experimenting, so I'm not bothered about art differences. When I find what art style that fits me I will work from there. So none of these will go to my game. Only maybe this last one, as I really like it, I'm still not sure, so I will probably make another house a bit more detailed and see how long that will take.

[KB90]

Hello. I made another two buildings, I'm quite happy about red roofed house, but tower looks really strange, how to fix that? Should I make bigger bricks?

[Pusty]

Not too sure about that... maybe shade parts of it (why are the bricks red? aren't tower bricks normally gray?)

[KB90]

Hi. Most castles I have seen in Eastern Europe are made from red bricks. I made some changes to tower, it seems to look a bit better now. Also I was trying to develop my main character in rusty amour, what do you think about it? I will try to animate him in following days. Thanks!

[Pusty]

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I think it looks good! It looks like something is missing but I'm not sure what it is.


Your image with fixed link

[KB90]

I keep on working.



Earth looks a bit odd from far away, but when you zoom in it looks better, and playing game you will be zoomed in, so I think it is good, it needs some editing as I copy/pasted it.

I have tried to animate my guy walking, but failed. I really struggle to do animations...

PELASE critique is very welcome!

[Pusty]

I like the ground you have there!
But I think you should rework these windows , because they look like the houses are filled with water
The new house looks sandy too me 'cause of the noise (not sure if this is intended)
And maybe raise the contrast on the hay thingy.

[KB90]

Was working on my chracter animations, not happy with result, looks better than last time, but still really weird.


If someone could edit it, would be amazing.
Here I put every frame.

[KB90]

Hello. I'm still working on this. Now I'm trying to add background to it: