Attempt at Cel Shading.

[Rosier]

Cel shading using the muzzle flash as a light source.  Not 100% pleased with it, but I don't know where else to go.

[Glak]

The arm that is not holding the gun is outlined in black on both sides.  It would be better if it were black on the side away from the gun, and light gray on the side towards the gun.

Also the pose is kind of strange.  He really shouldn't be cringing; he should be holding the pistol with both hands and looking at the target.

[Rosier]

I'll take another look at the arm, thanks.


As for the pose, it's supposed to be "Cool guy shooting while pulling his hat down."  Just kind of a cinematic thing I had thought up for a theoretical promo shot for something. 

EDIT:


Admittedly a minor change, but fixed the arm shading and made it a bit more confident looking.