really cool stylization (is that a word?) it will look good printed on a block mount

some things standing out is the dithering is too strong like there is too much contrast between the colours being dithered.
top of fringe feels a bit more like thick noodles than nice thin ribbons.
I'm no expert but composition feels a little bit unbalanced to the right now combined with her eyes drawing us straight out of the frame.
I cant measure right now but it looks like its not quite a square.
I think a square print would be nice so basically just add a bit to the right side.