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[WIP] Ocean (n.p.a)

on: May 23, 2015, 12:41:08 pm
I started to do n.p.a drawings, and would like to receive some advices, but I don't know any forum as suportive as pixelation, neither found a specific category to post it x_x, hope I can post here...

I'm not satisfied with the composition and anatomy/clothes of the chrater, anyone have any tips?  :(


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Re: [WIP] Ocean (n.p.a)

Reply #1 on: May 24, 2015, 08:42:40 am
Some crits:

I am unsure where the focal point of your picture is, the character is too close to the edge imo. What is the character doing, why is he there? Don't know what his outfit is for either. I think you should try making a small thumbnail where you figure the composition out first before you start detailing the piece, I made a quick thumbnail to illustrate:

I assumed that he was going to catch fish using the spear, I also limited myself to 3 colors as well, I remember reading somewhere that its a good idea. I'm not really an expert in composition but I hope this was helpful  :y:

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Re: [WIP] Ocean (n.p.a)

Reply #2 on: May 24, 2015, 06:34:45 pm
The stones visible below the surf is a gorgeous touch.